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Lying
   Awake in the darkness
      Of a memory
Surrounded
   By poeple
      In an empty room
A scream
   Recieved
      Only by blank stares
   From the past
Alone
   Yet surrounded
In a reckless solitude
That becomes
       Classified
      Examined
         Documented

A never ending
   Chaos
Of regret
  Solitude and memories
That haunt
Each passing moment
©2007-2009 ~shadeofjade
:iconshadeofjade:

Author's Comments

Kind of about going crazy from your own memories that haunt your thoughts. Possibly like schizophrenia, or being sent to the insane asylum. Someone told me they thought it was like Roswell, from the alien's perspective. Interesting, yet still fitting. I suppose you would feel like an alien in that situation. So... not really sure myself, just take it as you will.

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omg...I freaking love it....OMG OMG OMG!!!!
:iconshadeofjade:
wow, thank you so much! :D :hug: It's been a while since I've done any writing, so I wasn't sure about this one. Glad you like it.

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143 Miles

"What if all the world you think you know is an elaborate dream? And if you look at your reflection, is it all you want to be? What if you could look right through the cracks, would you find yourself afraid to see?" NIN
:iconevilnnasty129:
great job ^ ^

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~Neiaku: "d'you think maybe when a volcano erupts its actually the earth having an orgasm? 8D"
:iconcryingpain:
:clap: nice well written good choice of words :D

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:frail:Every artist was first an amateur - 'Ralph Waldo Emerson':frail:
:iconuntangling:
The poem itself is very haunting...."a never ending chaos of regret"...that line is just beautiful :love:
:iconblondehybird:
"Alone yet surrounded by a reckless solitude" and "a neverending chaos of regret" are my favourite lines in this.

:+fav:

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My lord, my angel of darkness
~Uldron
And they spent their final hours together, crying a river of broken hearts.
:iconswimstarguy:
Reckless solitude, ooo. ^_^ Great poem.

Screaming alone causes chaos.


~Zar4
:iconshadeofjade:
True, thanks. :D

--
143 Miles

"What if all the world you think you know is an elaborate dream? And if you look at your reflection, is it all you want to be? What if you could look right through the cracks, would you find yourself afraid to see?" NIN
:iconshadeofjade:
Thank you much. :hug:

--
143 Miles

"What if all the world you think you know is an elaborate dream? And if you look at your reflection, is it all you want to be? What if you could look right through the cracks, would you find yourself afraid to see?" NIN

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